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	<description>How to add erotic elements to your writing</description>
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		<title>By: admin</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 27 Mar 2010 00:12:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I was talking to a friend who writes tech manuals and he finds that reading his work out loud helps catch some of those awkward sentences.</description>
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		<title>By: Sascha Illyvich</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sascha Illyvich</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Feb 2010 18:59:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh my...</description>
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		<title>By: Sharyn</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sharyn</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Feb 2010 18:11:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lovely, informative article. I definitely recommend listening to the audio version, especially if your internal editor is often quite loud. :) 

While I&#039;ve never recorded any of my work, I often read it aloud when I finish a passage. Reading my work aloud allows me to perceive the work differently, catch the spots where the words don&#039;t flow correctly.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lovely, informative article. I definitely recommend listening to the audio version, especially if your internal editor is often quite loud. <img src='/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  </p>
<p>While I&#8217;ve never recorded any of my work, I often read it aloud when I finish a passage. Reading my work aloud allows me to perceive the work differently, catch the spots where the words don&#8217;t flow correctly.</p>
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